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She dances in and out on waves of broken glass,
A memory of better times, a perfection that couldn't last,
I can reach out and touch her if I don't mind the pain,
But the cuts and scars means nothing's the same,
Still I cling like an addict addicted to the thought,
Of a woman who so long ago I should have forgot.

I offer myself a short distraction,
Some sort of break in the breaking reaction,
But when the music dies down and the streets get cold,
I run through conversations and things I was told,
Like that three word phrase that we used to use,
How quickly the feeling of love turned to "I hate you"s.
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Someone-that-is-me Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh my this is wonderful!!
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MuteAssassin Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Thanks :)
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Someone-that-is-me Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
No problem :icononiononionplz:
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Fa-la-lala Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Love this!!!
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MuteAssassin Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
Thank you, kindly
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Invoking Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Very nice slant rhyming indeed. It didn't flaw the rythm or meter very much. Each line seemed to simply roll off of the tongue; that was an excellent read that I related very well to. Great work, my good person.
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tommyboywood Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
uh... it's painful mute master
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usnbxo Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
I like some of the slant rhyme you used.
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MuteAssassin Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013
Thanks :)
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